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 andywoolloo |
Full Length of the River |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 305 27 December, 2007 03:53 AM |
 Wow!! I loved it!   Can't wait to read more! Will the red head speak to Terry again? Will he fall in love with Steph and forget about the redhead? Wil Steph be o.k.? How will David take the news?? Oh my gosh!!! Please post chapter 2 and 3 and 4 and .... Dino and Terry are so cool together. Like peanut butter and jelly!  eta fanfic link Patty
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 131 27 December, 2007 04:01 AM |
 Okay, Patty has said already everything - so I just add: MORE!!!!   |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 04:10 AM Rough Magic Head Tart |
 Thank you, Pats! That's very sweet of you!!! Am v glad you like it! (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan)  It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 04:11 AM Rough Magic Head Tart |
 Thank you, B!!! I'm working on it!  (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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LVMARIE51 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 155 27 December, 2007 07:42 PM |
 What a great start!  You'll be okay, Steph with Terry looking after you!!! To echo everyone above ... more, please!!!!  "Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore, Dream, Discover." ~Mark Twain~ |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 07:46 PM Rough Magic Head Tart |
LV rocks, she always finds stuff even before I announce it.
  sMore is on the way! I just gotta tweak chapter two a bit. V glad you like it, LV! Terry as Knight in Shining Armour is my fave kinda story. But then y'all knew that.   (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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LVMARIE51 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 155 27 December, 2007 07:58 PM |
Quote: Oh, Yeah!!!  Go, Terry, Go!  :  [Couldn't resist, D!]"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore, Dream, Discover." ~Mark Twain~ |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 08:08 PM Rough Magic Head Tart |
Part two will be put up tonight and I'll send the official announcement out too. Thank you for being so supportive, LV! (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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Coffee03 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 31 27 December, 2007 08:08 PM |
I was trying to think of something you've written that I didn't like?
 Nope I got nothing.  This is an intense read and full of great visuals and when is that next chapter gonna be posted?  **Damn you now I'm stuck in here reading stuff! You are a very  woman.    |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 08:10 PM Rough Magic Head Tart |
My evil plan... Thank you Coff!! Am v happy you likeed so much! Next chapter posted v soon! (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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LVMARIE51 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 155 27 December, 2007 08:24 PM |
Well, then, in that case......
"I'll be back!!" <said with a decidedly heavy Austrian accent> "Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore, Dream, Discover." ~Mark Twain~ |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 08:35 PM Rough Magic Head Tart |
Ah-nuld's in da house!
 (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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LVMARIE51 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 155 27 December, 2007 10:22 PM |
Ah-nuld came and left...but...WOO! HOO! That was Outstanding! Who'd a thunk an airplane trip could keep you on the edge of your seat!!
 Great job! So, uhm, not meaning to rush anyone, but, uhm, when can we expect the hospital chapter??! "Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore, Dream, Discover." ~Mark Twain~ |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 27 December, 2007 10:25 PM Rough Magic Head Tart |
Glad you likeed! Hee hee... Am having a lot of fun writing this so it means a lot that ya're enjoyin' it! I'm tweaking chapter three tonight, not promising, but prob up in the a.m. if all goes well! (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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Mokum Jackie |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 421 28 December, 2007 03:57 AM |
  Whooooo hooo!!! great stuff Darrin, hats off to you!!! loved every second of it - I had to stop reading to feed hubby, who wanted his breakfast (grumble grumble), but in the mean time you posted chapter 3!!! Terry's such a brilliant knight in a white Lear jet, and Terry & Dino together, their dialogue is spot on and believable and funny! Hurrah! Love it, love it, love it! More, more more!  |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 28 December, 2007 04:15 AM Rough Magic Head Tart |
 Thank you, Jackie! That is v kind of you to say!! Am really glad you're enjoying it!And yes, chapter three is posted, everyone! And am over halfway on chapter four, with tweaking... should be able to post by the weekend. (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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andywoolloo |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 305 28 December, 2007 04:22 AM |
 Dino and Terry are so awesome! I agree with Jackie, you write them both fantastically!! The way they read each others minds and bantar back and forth, you have it perfect! And Steph, she is so a  or almost a with Terry.  Her teddy sitting on the brekkie tray watching telly with her!  She gets to go home with T!!! Lucky lucky lucky!! I so can't wait to read what happens next and can't wait for those f'ers that hurt her to get what's coming!!! I love how he talks to her and how she squeezes his hand. Most excellant Darrin!!  Eagerly awaiting the next installment!!! Patty
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 28 December, 2007 04:59 AM Rough Magic Head Tart |
Why, THANK YOU, Pats! I do love Terry and Dino patter so much, it's just a blast to write them. I'm so glad you're diggin' the story! And those fuckers... Well, their time is coming. (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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LVMARIE51 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 155 28 December, 2007 07:13 AM |
Mind you, I'm not complaining, but...
Do you EVER sleep???? That's a totally great chapter!! Everything was so believable: Steph's rxns,  Terry's rxns,  the EMTs, the ER dr. and nurses...I've seen them all, and you really got it right! So, please tell me we not only get the continuing story of Steph and Terry, but now, we also get, "How the Arseholes Got Theirs" right?!?!?  [never thought I'd use that smilie!] Where's that camo-clad, napalm dropping, bazooka-shooting smilie when you need it!!!!  Go, white knights, Terry and Dino!!!    <that's the best I could find!> Speaking of going , I'm off to work; carry on.....remember, the weekend clock is ticking!!   "Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do. So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore, Dream, Discover." ~Mark Twain~ |
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7dlh7 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 1008 28 December, 2007 07:35 AM Rough Magic Head Tart |
I really got to find THAT smilie! (I've seen it, actually, think I have anyway!  )Thank you so much, LV! That's awesome to hear cuz you know, a lot of times I just wing it! I'd like to thank ER, Saved and yes, even Emergency! for my medical knowledge! Am v glad you think T and Steph are going right too, those are both being written from the gut. As for the arseholes gettin' theirs... I'll let Dino answer that one. "Well... YEAH!" Thanks, Dino! Chapter four should be done for posting tomorrow night as long as RL cooperates! (Hubs is closing at the restaurant so should do. )As for sleep... Off to do that right now! (a girl for the gender conscious)(and always proud to be his fan) It's a labour of love - so please don't ask me why. - Thompson Twins, "You Take Me Up" |
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Whisperee1 |
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Magic, CA Citizen Rough Magicker
Posts: 263 28 December, 2007 10:25 PM |
Put me in the more-more-more camp!
I love the twist that they found the "wrong" cargo, and on the Terry-Dino dynamic, I love it! Very well paced, can't wait 'til the next installment! Perfect smilie here!   |
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