
Jackie, I've really enjoyed your story!
You tell a mean tale!
Sorta hoping you get some more chapters up soon?!?!
Looking forward to seeing the characterizations evolve!
edited to add fan fic link
"Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things that you didn't do than by the ones you did do.
So throw off the bowlines. Sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails.
Explore, Dream, Discover."
~Mark Twain~





How you spin a yarn and stop short at the edge of the cliff, I will never understand.....but I love it!
So are you one of those writers who does a chapter a month, or a chapter a week, or what!?!
I'm just wonderin' when to expect the next explosion w/Q and Brie (Oh, yeah, she's not French, she's American
)...erm, I mean Bree!!
MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE
I like to dose carefully
Yes, I be the evil cliffhanger Queen.
Don't be a meanie!!!!! I really need something to distract me from work
PUHLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZE?!?!?!?
....or maybe.......
or even something more graphic
If not, 'sokay, I'm patient....I'll wait.....quietly......
.....honestly......
....it's okay......
.....I'm patient.....

, Ahhdrea!
Ole Brie can go off and stink up some other poor shmuck's life, far as I'm concerned and leave Quent and Taz alone! Okay, now, just waitin' for fireworks! Gotta be!!! Soon, please!!!
Can we look for another one soon, puhleeeeeeeze!??!?!